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Опубликовано 5 лет назад по предмету Английский язык от doctor24163

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People are not loyal and there is too much rudeness nowadays
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    Ответ дан limo2
    Nowadays people are too cruel, maybe not all of them but most of our planet. We are interested only what happening with us, we don’t look at others. If we didn’t like something, we start shouting, we start to be aggressive. we don’t take into account the circumstances, we can yell at a person who is older than us. We don’t respect others.
    It’s a big problem with which we don’t want to deal with. We don’t think at all about emotions, we think about our wants. We all just want now and there.
    It's scary to walk down the street and think that someone is will screaming on you or will attack you for his purposes.
    I think we must be more loyal, better and understand not only in relation to themselves, but also to others. We must try to solve the problems without shouting and aggressive behavior. We must change our attitude to live. First think and than do. Take life easier.

    Я старалась, не знаю подойдёт ли он тебе и в таком стиле нужно ли и нету ли там ошибок, надеюсь все хорошо
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      Ответ дан doctor24163
      спасибо
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      Ответ дан limo2
      Пожалуйста
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      Ответ дан doctor24163
      там вконце в слове behaviour ошибка, можешь поменять если хочешь
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      Ответ дан limo2
      Ой, извини, я просто быстро набирала
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      Ответ дан doctor24163
      ничего